Comments on: Teaser Excerpt One

By: Lucid Dreaming

Lucid Dreaming — Sun, 12 Dec 2010 23:49:18 +0000

Hello! Just wanted to say that I like your writing style and that I’m going to visit your blog often from now on Keep it up!

By: admin

admin — Tue, 15 Jun 2010 22:27:38 +0000

Thank you for taking the time to comment. Sorry for the delay in reply, I had to make my way through all the spam first! Glad you enjoyed the excerpt, the pending book will be available soon .

By: Amy

Amy — Fri, 04 Jun 2010 19:48:49 +0000

O’Della, This is a beautiful story. You painted a beautiful picture of what it feels like to be thrust into this enviroment as a thirteen year old girl. You made her feelings felt to be torn from a safe, comfortable
home enviroment,surrouded by the love of family,to the stark reality of the regimen of state run home life. It is very well writtten. Yes,I like it very much. The wording,the picture presented, make your readers Invisible participants in the daily life of this young girl as she trys to cope with daily life.

By: Bruce

Bruce — Wed, 19 May 2010 17:47:52 +0000

Dear Odella, Thanks a million for popping over to my blog and for your kind comments, wow, this little teaser is very good, I really enjoyed it, good imagery, will be back again to read some more, take care

By: William Ramay

William Ramay — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 13:47:37 +0000

By: Jessica

Jessica — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 21:57:17 +0000

LOVE IT!! As usual, Della, you are amazing and I love that you share your talent with the world!!

By: carmon

carmon — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 15:31:27 +0000

WoW very good lady.you have awesome talent.which i have none LOL keep up the good work it will pay off.

By: admin

admin — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 15:12:21 +0000

I wanted to say thanks to those whom have taken the time to post a comment on my book excerpt. Feedback helps a lot.

Ya’ll are great! Won’t be too much longer before the book will be released. I’ll keep you posted.

Again, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate.

By: Lisa

Lisa — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 14:58:26 +0000

Great story! I was truly enjoying it and hated that I was unable to finish, The story is truly grabbing and holding attention. I can’t wait to read the rest. You are doing a great job. I can see a great writer with a grand future in your path. Truly gifted with words. I will second that WOW!!!!!!!

By: Ken Smith

Ken Smith — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 09:33:04 +0000

WOW, Just WOW, I am impressed, You don’t write half bad girl lol
Really I thought this was awesome, Grabbed my attention from the first few words, Not only that they held on to. Great Job. One of those ya can’t put down till finished cept I didn’t get the whole book

I especially liked
Get up damn it, before you cost everyone their breakfast!” As the shoe connected with my hipbone, a piercing streak of lightening went across my pelvic area.

I heard myself saying, “Touch me one more time and you will need the help of your God as well as mine.”

Way to go girl. You do great work
Hugs, Best wishes & God BLess