Comments on: Teaser Excerpt One http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/ poetry and inspirational writings Tue, 15 Jun 2010 22:31:05 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: admin http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-688 admin Tue, 15 Jun 2010 22:27:38 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-688 Thank you for taking the time to comment. Sorry for the delay in reply, I had to make my way through all the spam first! Glad you enjoyed the excerpt, the pending book will be available soon <hopefully>. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Sorry for the delay in reply, I had to make my way through all the spam first! Glad you enjoyed the excerpt, the pending book will be available soon .

]]> By: Amy http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-603 Amy Fri, 04 Jun 2010 19:48:49 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-603 O'Della, This is a beautiful story. You painted a beautiful picture of what it feels like to be thrust into this enviroment as a thirteen year old girl. You made her feelings felt to be torn from a safe, comfortable home enviroment,surrouded by the love of family,to the stark reality of the regimen of state run home life. It is very well writtten. Yes,I like it very much. The wording,the picture presented, make your readers Invisible participants in the daily life of this young girl as she trys to cope with daily life. O’Della, This is a beautiful story. You painted a beautiful picture of what it feels like to be thrust into this enviroment as a thirteen year old girl. You made her feelings felt to be torn from a safe, comfortable
home enviroment,surrouded by the love of family,to the stark reality of the regimen of state run home life. It is very well writtten. Yes,I like it very much. The wording,the picture presented, make your readers Invisible participants in the daily life of this young girl as she trys to cope with daily life.

]]> By: Bruce http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-482 Bruce Wed, 19 May 2010 17:47:52 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-482 Dear Odella, Thanks a million for popping over to my blog and for your kind comments, wow, this little teaser is very good, I really enjoyed it, good imagery, will be back again to read some more, take care :) Dear Odella, Thanks a million for popping over to my blog and for your kind comments, wow, this little teaser is very good, I really enjoyed it, good imagery, will be back again to read some more, take care :)

]]> By: William Ramay http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-153 William Ramay Tue, 23 Feb 2010 13:47:37 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-153 O'Della, This is a beautiful story. You painted a beautiful picture of what it feels like to be thrust into this enviroment as a thirteen year old girl. You made her feelings felt to be torn from a safe, comfortable home enviroment,surrouded by the love of family,to the stark reality of the regimen of state run home life. It is very well writtten. Yes,I like it very much. The wording,the picture presented, make your readers Invisible participants in the daily life of this young girl as she trys to cope with daily life. O’Della, This is a beautiful story. You painted a beautiful picture of what it feels like to be thrust into this enviroment as a thirteen year old girl. You made her feelings felt to be torn from a safe, comfortable
home enviroment,surrouded by the love of family,to the stark reality of the regimen of state run home life. It is very well writtten. Yes,I like it very much. The wording,the picture presented, make your readers Invisible participants in the daily life of this young girl as she trys to cope with daily life.

]]> By: Jessica http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-151 Jessica Mon, 22 Feb 2010 21:57:17 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-151 LOVE IT!! As usual, Della, you are amazing and I love that you share your talent with the world!! LOVE IT!! As usual, Della, you are amazing and I love that you share your talent with the world!!

]]> By: carmon http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-146 carmon Sat, 20 Feb 2010 15:31:27 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-146 WoW very good lady.you have awesome talent.which i have none LOL keep up the good work it will pay off. WoW very good lady.you have awesome talent.which i have none LOL keep up the good work it will pay off.

]]> By: admin http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-145 admin Sat, 20 Feb 2010 15:12:21 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-145 I wanted to say thanks to those whom have taken the time to post a comment on my book excerpt. Feedback helps a lot. Ya'll are great! Won't be too much longer before the book will be released. I'll keep you posted. Again, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate. I wanted to say thanks to those whom have taken the time to post a comment on my book excerpt. Feedback helps a lot.

Ya’ll are great! Won’t be too much longer before the book will be released. I’ll keep you posted.

Again, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate.

]]> By: Lisa http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-144 Lisa Sat, 20 Feb 2010 14:58:26 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-144 Great story! I was truly enjoying it and hated that I was unable to finish, The story is truly grabbing and holding attention. I can't wait to read the rest. You are doing a great job. I can see a great writer with a grand future in your path. Truly gifted with words. I will second that WOW!!!!!!! Great story! I was truly enjoying it and hated that I was unable to finish, The story is truly grabbing and holding attention. I can’t wait to read the rest. You are doing a great job. I can see a great writer with a grand future in your path. Truly gifted with words. I will second that WOW!!!!!!!

]]> By: Ken Smith http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-128 Ken Smith Mon, 15 Feb 2010 09:33:04 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-128 WOW, Just WOW, I am impressed, You don't write half bad girl lol Really I thought this was awesome, Grabbed my attention from the first few words, Not only that they held on to. Great Job. One of those ya can't put down till finished cept I didn't get the whole book I especially liked Get up damn it, before you cost everyone their breakfast!” As the shoe connected with my hipbone, a piercing streak of lightening went across my pelvic area. I heard myself saying, “Touch me one more time and you will need the help of your God as well as mine.” Way to go girl. You do great work Hugs, Best wishes & God BLess WOW, Just WOW, I am impressed, You don’t write half bad girl lol
Really I thought this was awesome, Grabbed my attention from the first few words, Not only that they held on to. Great Job. One of those ya can’t put down till finished cept I didn’t get the whole book

I especially liked
Get up damn it, before you cost everyone their breakfast!” As the shoe connected with my hipbone, a piercing streak of lightening went across my pelvic area.

I heard myself saying, “Touch me one more time and you will need the help of your God as well as mine.”

Way to go girl. You do great work
Hugs, Best wishes & God BLess

]]> By: william http://alhavakia.com/2010/02/12/teaser-excerpt-one/comment-page-1/#comment-124 william Sun, 14 Feb 2010 23:15:55 +0000 http://alhavakia.com/?p=323#comment-124 Dear Odella, Thanks a million for popping over to my blog and for your kind comments, wow, this little teaser is very good, I really enjoyed it, good imagery, will be back again to read some more, take care :) Dear Odella, Thanks a million for popping over to my blog and for your kind comments, wow, this little teaser is very good, I really enjoyed it, good imagery, will be back again to read some more, take care :)

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